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STORY PLAN

0.5 Jack finds out about magic (through ancient tomes (yeah that old chestnut (why am I writing in these brackets!)))

(Need a story on finding magic including Carline and him getting married (yeah there's a huge story gap)

1    Jack Finding magic with Carline, Luke

Jack Joseph Grim (Reaper)- the protagonist who is discredited for finding magic was popular for being the only survivor of the Donald massacre (this is where his actual Valkyrie identity of anarchy is hinted at. As when he was a small boy he survived an outbreak in his town where everyone ended up brutally murdered supposedly by each other.) (magic)

Carline- Jack's wife who, is also a researcher and has being going out with Lucas which isn't going so well at the time.  (argues with Lucas for the first part.

Luke- Jacks best friend and paranormal agent sent to look after Jack and Carline on their journey. Has a very noble and honourable way at looking at things, master of karate and is a bit of a philosopher with Jack (non-magic)

Magic- part of the undiscovered areas of the brain (only in some humans as it is a bloodline thing) it is first thought to need spells and incantations yet actually is all in the mind. So if you fully believe you can do it, in most cases, you can.

1.5 The prejudice is created between magic and non magic people. As the Ministry is formed.

Ministry- the Ministry is formed by the magics as they believe themselves better than non-magics and hence the old royalty-shitting-on-the-little-guy setup forms as the ministry forms an army set up on how "pure" your magic is, to enforce the Ministry's rule as a monarchy/senate  

2 The mysterious killer (Visceral)

Visceral- a sick twisted force of nature, anarchy in a human form.

3 The chase after Visceral by Jack.

This chase builds tension between Jack and his wife and friends as he is slightly persuaded by Visceral (subconsciously)

4 Jack finds out that he is possessed by Visceral who is a Valkyrie.

Valkyrie- angels of the darker side of human nature mainly war like and psychotic.  

5 Visceral takes full control and wreaks havoc. For ages (I'm going to have fun with this part)

Visceral has an array of abilities from super human strength, mastery of any weapon he picks up (has a very violent, raw yet professional style of fighting), powerful/violent magic (Aka. Teleporting, massive fireballs and a massive massive energy release the power of an atomic bomb. )  He can change parts of his body and make weapons of his own body tissue (which requires him to have unusual eating habits.)

6. Jack takes control of his body and is chased down by Lucas who lets him escape.

7. The confederation is formed by the Non-magics (fronted by Luke who has taken care of Carline since Jacks turn into Visceral) and use incredibly advanced technology to be able to fight the ministry (who depend on magic and are too lazy to go with technology) so now both sides are even, both fighting with huge amounts of Prejudice making nobody happy.

7.5. Lucas and Carline start to fall in love.

8. A member of the ministry council called Jameson Vi Marshal plots to take control and create himself as king.
Along with his new mistress known only as  _________???? (Is actually Deceit.)

9. The confederation gains more power and has numerous bases in places such as South America and Russia.

10. The ministry creates the 'Crusaders' who are sent on fanatical missions to hunt down major confederation assets such as Lucas.

11. Carline is captured by the ministry and is put on trial for treason. She is set to hang when Lucas offers to turn himself in for her release.

12. The ministry agrees yet tricks them and captures Lucas and plans to broadcast the execution of both of them to 'set an example'.

13. As the execution is broadcast, at the very last minute, Jack arrives in a classic explosive style, saving Carline and Lucas he takes them back to the ministry and disappears before they can ask why, without saying a word.

14. We flash back to when Jack was hiding and we see he has come to befriend Visceral and have learned to work together.
Its then that another Valkyrie arrives called violence who says that a meeting will be held amongst the valkyries. Visceral fears this, as it is treason for a valkyrie to compromise their powers with a human.

15. The meeting is held in the Himalayas where the three fates sit and say the world will end at anarchy's rise.

Other Valkyries at the meeting.



Necrosis
Prefers the form of a little girl in order to deceive those around her. With one touch or glare she can send a person hurtling towards their inevitable death. This makes her one of the most powerful valkyries. She has an unnaturally calm demeanour and takes few things seriously treating it all like a pathetic game.



Violence
Never takes things seriously and likes to consider the other Valkyries as 'one big family' with Visceral as his close brother. He treats even the most sickening, violent acts as a great prank and rarely looks serious unless told he has to try a more peaceful approach.

He is most shocked when Visceral betrays them and begins a vendetta to kill him.
Has a love for dramatic entrances and gory, quick executions.

Rage
A large bulwark of a man, who is able to run through walls at ease, would rather trample over someone than try and actually fight them. Has stayed at Necrosis side for millennia and rarely talks.

Misery
She talks in whispers and has tears constantly flowing, one look into her eyes can cause anyone to suicide or cower weeping.

Deceit
She is not even trusted by her fellow Valkyries for tricking them in past event and has a fetish for playing cards, which she also uses as weapons if the need calls for it. She has an alluring charm that she uses to her advantage. She will fight by tricking others to help her and will only fight if completely necessary.

Chimera
One of the nicer Valkyries that never got along with Visceral but finds a change in him. She has the ability to create illusions and disappear, she is surprisingly good and believes the Valkyries should have a higher purpose.

16. The valkyries anticipate a war and prepare for it. Jack speaks out and the Valkyries realise that Visceral has betrayed them; they attack Visceral who flees back to civilisation.

17. Upon returning Jack finds out that Carline and Lucas have been captured and goes to rescue them.

18. Jack then learns of what the ministry has become and begins to secretly helps the confederation while being attacked by both sides.

18.5 Chimera tricks Jack and captures him, she then questions him until she knows the whole story, she offers her help and at first Visceral refuses, but Jack convinces him.

19. During Lucas absence the confederation formed the witch hunters, Lucas disagrees with the division but is convinced it will not attack innocent people; the division is now headed by a man simply known as Victory who appears to have noble and chivalrous ideals for the witch hunters.

20. The Confederation creates a dispelling device from a strange new material they simply call warp that was found by the witch hunters, it has the ability to stop magic and is put into mass production.

20.5 Chimera is captured by a mysterious stranger (victory) who begins tests to understand the Valkyries better. Jack rescues her and they begin to come closer.

21. In retaliation to warp material, the Ministry makes EMP's (electronic magnetic pulse generators.) and now creates a more elite class of soldiers who rely on close combat, thus the wars now rely on who can fight better in close quarters in order to reach their warp generators or their magnetic field generators.

22. Violence tracks down Jack and begins to hunt him down till Jack hides under Lucas's protection after begging for help.

23. Lucas talks with Jack and asks why he saved him to which Jack replies, same reason you saved me.
Lucas learns of Visceral and that there are more Valkyries.

24. When Jack leaves Lucas tells no-one but tells Victory about the Valkyries and Victory suggest that a new division within the witch hunters is created to hunt down the Valkyries.

24.5 victory begins to take control of the Confederation from the shadows and through politics sets doubt in people about Lucas.

23. The Valkyries track down Jack and capture him, Chimera then saves him and together they escape. Chimera admits to Necrosis that she has helped Jack because she now loves him. The Valkyries are furious.

23.5 Lucas gets forcefully demoted, Victory taking his place.

25. James Vi Marshal takes control of the Ministry council and becomes the first King of the Ministry, his first move is to set an even stricter line of Nobleage and all others are placed into the army to turn the tide of war.

25.5 Victory makes Lucas subject to a new experiment, turning him into a mechanical monster, to which Victory plans to use as his assassin, he now has complete control of the Confederation.

25.8 Victory sends Lucas out to kill all major officials of the Ministry, and also traitors to the Confederation. Many now resent Lucas as nothing but a machine with no heart or remorse. Carline seems to be the only one who understands him through this time yet both are separated, by Victory.

26. Victory now known as the Warleader of the confederation leads a massive war front into the capital of the Ministry. After secretly trapping Lucas in the dungeons and holding Carline hostage.

27. The Valkyries arrive at the capital causing mass destruction enjoying the spectactle as the ministry and confederation try to tear each other apart.

28. Jack arrives to try and stop the chaos.

29. Victory who has secretly been a Valkyrie himself. Then springs a plan to capture the Valkyries, which drives them into a building that is laced with warp stone. The Valkyries including Jack and Visceral are forced to work together as they try to escape. Yet Victory soon subdues all the Valkyries. Jack/Visceral face off against Victory in a battle in the main hall with the witch hunter elite surounding them. Victory is clearly stronger and gouges out Jack's left eye. When Victory delivers a lethal blow pinning Jack to the wall with his sword, …


Jack looked up at the smirking face towering over him, with a whisper he said "why?"

Victory's eyes lit up, "The Valkyries have done nothing but cause evil within the hearts of men and true peace can only be found when the evil in men's hearts dies."

He looked to the heavens and cried out.

"There can only be one winner in order to attain peace, imagine it a world with no war, with no anger, hate or fear… only victory."

He leaned in close to Jack
"A world where people did not go forth into the future, creating more convenient ways to kill each other or destroying the earth yet,learned to live alongside another with no evil in their souls, a world without Valkyries, a world without conflict, a world without you."

Victory grasped the sword embedded in Jack chest a yanked it out letting Jack fall to the floor in a crumpled heap.

"So this is how it ends" Jack thought, as the darkness began to swallow him, "we lost" whispered Visceral in his mind.
Jack eyes began to flicker as they changed from red to blue then fade as life left him.

Victory would kill the other Valkyries and the world would come to a halt, no more war, no more conflict   

No

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                            You






No

Light pierced through Jacks mind as life began rushing to him, the familiar fire of Visceral rised within his soul, yet this time it burned with all the colours of the universe.

"No" he whispered again now loud enough for Victory to turn and stare aghast as Jack started to rise.
"The world needs the Valkyries" Jack and Visceral gasped as one.

"Everyone has a dark side that they must face, through everdays struggle we live with our demons, and that's what makes us human," he said his voice steadily rising.

"People don't want peace no we mistake peace and order for what we truly want, we want love, hope and the future!" he now cried out with a new strength.

"The worlds problems cannot be solved with order, with enslaving the world to obey, No! The world needs the freedom to make its choices, The    world    needs     ANARCHY!"

Jack and Visceral roared as his right eye lit up and a fire appeared in the socket of his left. Victory turned and screamed "finish him!"
A wave of arrows, bullets and knives came at Jack who cast them aside and leaped into the witch hunters tearing apart the massive force with his hands as he danced around them, a man possessed even more than before, bursting with energy as he sensed every movement in the room, feeling more alive than anyone could possibly imagine.

Victory ran to the door as the last of his followers were laid to waste.
He turned sharply down the hall to the entrance picking up speed as he made his escape.

As he was about to crash through the glass doors, the wall left of him exploded as Jack crashed through it smashing victory to the ground.

Victory looked up dazed as he saw Jack towering over him, as explosions of colour danced in Jacks eyes, sillohetted by the falling flakes of debris.

The last image Victory saw was Jacks foot lowering into his vision, then blackness.


30. Jack frees the other Valkyries and imprisons Victory in one of his own cages,

31.Jack now Anarchy talks to the Valkyries and strikes a deal with them to help him with his new plan to end this world along with Chimera's persuasion, they agree.

32. The ministry creates a new capital in the skies on a floating island to better protect itself.

33. The confederation now broken from the attack has had to retreat back into hiding where Lucas is reinstated to take full command.

34. The confederation receives a massive boon from a new party who formed in Eastern Europe known as the organisation.

35. The organisation is a team of super soldiers who now spearhead the confederation into a victorious win in America.

36. The Ministry lifts their major cities into the sky just like their capital, and begin to fight from the skies and secure land areas by destroying them totally before claiming them. The confederation sees this as a dirty trick and is forced to go into hiding underground.

37. The confederation designs a new base in the Himalayas where they now can launch air forces but are still weak and may not survive a few more years.

38. The ministry's capital is attacked by Anarchy who destroys the main floating engine, which makes it crash to the ground. Anarchy announces his presence to the world and how he will end this world.

39. The confederation enjoys the respite and think that Anarchy is on their side. But Lucas and Carline are both hesitant.

40. The ministry suffers many more blows from Anarchy and the Confederation become more powerful.

41. Then anarchy reveals he is the leader of the organisation who destroy the Confederation's main base and flee into hiding.

42. Both the ministry and the confederation begin to fight Anarchy and the Confederation offer a truce with the ministry.

42.5 the ministry finds Victory (who has been graced by the fates, making him stronger. Unknown by anyone else) in imprisonment and tells the king of the Valkyries

43. The king agrees to the truce which is led by Lucas, and Chimera disguised to make sure it all goes well.
But the trap is sprung and Victory reveals himself. He demands surrender from both the Valkyries and the Confederation.

43.5. Anarchy, furious, storms the capital.

44. Anarchy assassinates the king and just escapes from Victory who tries to kill him.

45. The ministry now ruled again by a council agree to the original truce, and there Victory persuades the new alliance that he will personally hunt down Anarchy.

46. The Valkyries now hide and run separately. And Anarchy goes to the fates for help.

47. Anarchy asks the fates why Victory is stronger who simply say they made him so. With that the fates attack Anarchy who escapes with his life.

48. Victory begins to take control of the alliance, Him and Lucas become enemies as Victory tries to turn the world into an army.
Slowly old prejudices start to form as the world becomes devoted to killing Anarchy.

49. Anarchy finds the other Valkyries and tells them they have to kill the fates. The Valkyries disagree saying that to kill the fates would destroy the world. Anarchy does not believe this and plans to still kill him, the Valkyries are forced to attack Anarchy.

50. Anarchy is finally caught by the alliance who drag him to the gallows. Carline faces Anarchy in the dungeons, Anarchy scares her off pretending to be evil.

51. At the execution Chimera rescues Anarchy. Chimera dies in the incident and says that Anarchy must coninue.

52. Anarchy disappears, tortured by Chimeras death.

53. The fates come out from hiding and Victory hails them as gods, the world follows suit and soon Victory and the Fates have complete control.

54. Anarchy returns as a deranged maniac who cuts through swathes of guard till he stands before the fates, he slaughters them on the spot and disappears.

54.5  Lucas is offered to have his mechanics taken out to a minimum, he refuses despite Carline wanting him to. He decides to use his powers to track down Anarchy.

55. Anarchy continues his deranged acts of terrorism until he lures Victory out.

56. Victory surrounds Anarchy in townX (that's what I'll call it for the moment.)
Which Anarchy blows up, destroying Victory's forces and captures Victory.

57. Anarchy takes over a broadcast station and plans to execute Victory, Victory quickly tries to say he can't be killed since that would destroy his Valkyrie trait, that they were gods. Anarchy kills him anyway saying that's what the fates said and that there are no gods.

58. Anarchy begins an attack on the capital, which leads to Anarchy being caught on the edge of the capital …


THE END: anarchy stands on the brink of the chasm with the world against him. Lucas stands before, his rifle in his hand

Nothing else seems to exist,

Anarchy.

Lucas.

The gun.

Silence.

Lucas gritted his teeth, this monster was once his friend, his brother. Carline was torn in part by him.

All because of Valkyries.

The world would have been so simple if they hadn't taken over-

Anarchy quickly reached into his pocket and on instinct the gun in Lucas's hand went off straight into Anarchy's chest.

The sound rang out as the assembly drew in a sharp breath.

Lucas stood horrified.

Anarchy stood there smiling as he held onto his old pocket watch.

"Thank you" Jack/Visceral/Anarchy whispered.

Then he fell.

The ground fell away from him as the chasm's edge shrunk into the distance.

Jack closed his eyes as his life flashed through his mind, memories floated past his eyes,

Visceral, Victory, the Valkyries, Carline, Lucas.


Chimera.

Tears began to streak away from Jack's face as the air carried them.

He had placed the world's hate upon his shoulders.

Now he had destroyed it.

Above the roar of the wind Jack began to hear the crowd above cheering Lucas's name as it sunk in.

Anarchy the villain who had tried to destroy the world was dead.

The world was free.

Jack began to laugh as the ground rushed up to meet him tears streaming from his eyes.

He had won.